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there is no such thing as traditional American English
Though unable to speak, he could still read in English, and often, the newspaper left on the table while Margarete fed him contained writings in traditional American English. - Zavia_63181mthPosted
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it's sounds like a monster
Li Shi took a few steps closer, and once he got a clearer look at her face, a line from the Book of Songs instantly came to mind: 'Skin like lard, neck like a grub; teeth like melon seeds, temples like beetles' wings.' - Zavia_63182mthPosted
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author please by a good person and hooked them up
A smile tugged at the corner of Yuan Xiaoyue's lips. It seemed like a possibility. - Zavia_63182mthCommented
why is the mc like a pervert always thinking about women it doesn't make sense
"They will run out of food by tomorrow, won't they?" - Zavia_63182mthCommented
this was Unnecessary and just ruined the mood
*Squelch* *Squelch* *Squelch* - Zavia_63183mthPosted
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Daughter of the
[TITLE: Vampire Princess, Son of the strongest being, Youngest to reach Immortal King Realm.] - Zavia_63183mthPosted
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dude please don't use spanish names in different genre it doesn't suit the novel and names from history like zeuse or Thor or its ok to use at reference but if you take take names from other stories or myth your gonna lower the quality of your great work
Hello, my name is Anna Shadowbane, and I am the daughter of Diablo Shadowbane, the right-hand man of the Lord of Darkness in the Eternal Realm. I take pride in my father, being his only daughter. I am always training, aspiring to become a pillar of the Darkness Domain. - Zavia_63184mthCommented
hey author you know I love your work but I have to say it you have a problem don't use spasm say his mouth twitched say he groaned say he moaned to the satisfying increase in strength my head heart ever time a author use words incorrectly
Ch 4 This Person Is Definitely Black When Cut Open - Zavia_63184mthCommented
Author please give the mc his freedom back
"MnâŚNnghâŚ" Ellis was unaware of what was to come⌠- Zavia_63185mthCommented
NOT LIKE ODIN the god of wisdom thunder and lightning the god vikings , the god of elf the god of monters , the god of giants , The god of beast if you don't have a original name don't use one
'Bifrost?'Â - Zavia_63185mthCommented
dude, stop using myths of gods in your novel. You're degrading your own work make something original or something with similar concepts
'Bifrost?'Â - Zavia_63185mthCommented
hey author I just gave you a power stone
Hey, hey this mistress here has something to say! Don't be stinky with your vote and review so that this story can continue! Remember, this miss here has a big temper! Hmph! It's not like I'm saying that I'm very happy that you read my story. Hmph! Don't forget to vote and review, if not.... Hmph! *make a small fist - Zavia_63185mthCommented
this is where you lost me what's up with this it makes no sense why is guilty and afraid and stupid and what's with live like a human people waking up from comas don't become mute they fell into deep sleep
After she was once again left alone in her room, Qin Yu sank into an internal battle inside her heart where her present humanity faced her zombie past.