RAININJA
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hahaha bro, are you kidding with your readers, too many flashbacks bro, it can make your readers bored, my advice is not to flashback too much, because this fanfic chapter has over 100
Flashback again, but it's fine
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Black clover
I think maybe people are not very interested in eleceed, How about solo leveling, very few people make that fanfic, even though it was made to stop in the middle of the road, or it could also make black clover fanfic because there are so many fans. (just a suggestion)
if possible don't make the kingpin die, but cut off both his hands and feet, and make a mark on his face that says loser is made of heated iron / like a slave mark in one piece, make the kingpin live with that condition, so the kingpin prefers to die than live like That, in my opinion, is good revenge.
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