Opalescent

Unsure? Just read the first chapter; you'll be able to tell whether you'll like it or not upon reading the first few sentences. From what I've seen so far, this is the best story I've seen on this app. Not a high bar, but this is still absolutely amazing. A few uncommon grammatical errors here and there but everything else is fine. Read it.

Why is everybody just blatantly lying? Even halfway through the first chapter, the readability is absolutely abysmal, and that persists throughout; a consistent lack of punctuation, terrible grammar (such as not beginning multiple sentences with a capital letter) and shifty, confusing prose plagues this novel. Ignoring the grammar, some characters are completely one-dimensional, such as a "bully" in the beginning who insults the protagonist, only to crumble when he's shown the slightest backbone (a shoddy insult involving a toilet). Not sure if characters like that are used to make protagonists look cool or whatever, but it's really a massive problem in a multitude of novels. I liked the concept of absorbing plot armour. I've got nothing to say in regards to story development and world background. Haven't gotten far. Don't want to. Overall, I have a large number of gripes, and if the general readability isn't fixed, many others will hop off before even reading the second chapter.