GhostDost

Author is trash, arrogant like every other chinese authors. Author is child predator, bride groomer. Heinous, despicable mentality. I don't know wtf is wrong with chinese authors, when they write fanfic of original novels they start dissing the original plot etc etc. Don't read this shit.

This story is great, but if could add more slice of life in the story it would be great, just make the wonder woman only honorary member of the justice league, let her spend more time with edger, and introduce some more time skips. Atleast don't let justice league and MC interact much. Let it be a separate story. Otherwise you will mess up big time like many other fanfiction authors have done so far. Other authors ruins the story when they make original character as mere extra's. Don't make the same mistake.

Although novel is good, but MC is not up to the mark, after reading the summary I thought mc would be ruthless but it was quite opposite. Making friends and all.

Childish author. Not every occasion demands a smirk from mc. Author doesn't know the difference between annoying and rude. All the dialogues are filled with cringe. Work on it author. You are ruining a good novel.

Story wise it's not bad. But, man your English is very average. There are many mistakes (like in many passages crucial words are missing/omitted, incoherent sentence which make no sense until you reread it 2-3 times by filling up the gaps using brain). You are spoon feeding the protegonist, HAREM aspect is unbelievable, it's make no sense, no modern lady would agree to let her man have many other wives.( So give a intresting point of view). Power leveling is average, there is no charm to it when the MC level up. It's to convineint for MC. As I saw your explanation regarding your English. And inexperience in writing novels, so , I will let it slide and not criticize you too much. But overall it's a good story but with a bad writer.

it's not about harem that irritates me it's the way the author portrays other characters. it's just trash writing . if I am not wrong then the author must be Chinese. only they can make this type of crap, like many others on this site. very eccentric.

Ch. 239 is completely bullshit. And cringe worthy. I was right to diss this novel.

In recent times, the authors of reincarnation novels are breaking the taboos, by telling the npc's about their possession of the original character. And I hate that to the core. So I will not read this. Whoever wants to read this they can read all they want. For me the moments mc start spilling the beans about reincarnation, it's a no go novel for me.

It's a good novel it's a really unique idea, But you should make mc more ruthless. And try to introduce something similar to status screen. I hope you atleast make chapters a bit longer. And I hope this novel cross atleast 1200+ chapters.

I don't know what to say. MC is a ghost , but is in denial about it,he has some pretty good skills but doesn't use them because he assumes it can hurt "living beings ". He loves human's because he thinks he is also a human. It's an noying mc is 25+ years old but have the brain capacity of 5 year old. And I can clearly see it's a chinese influenced because of cultivation power up. Inspite of appoclyptic world with level up genre. People use cultivation shit. It's a annoying story. If u want to read a childish and too goody mc story then this is for you. I am out of this shit.