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That’s the spirit, you should always look to improve yourself, nobody’s born with it, I’ll be happy to see your writing quality improve
Was First exited for a new basketball novel, started reading it… The story development itself isn’t that bad. But I assume English isn’t the authors 1st maybe not even 2nd language… so it’s quite a difficult read. Author should look for an editor and I then, maybe this novel could become something. To reiterate this is just an objective critique, am not trying to antagonize the author, I appreciate his effort it takes much to write a novel…
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nice chapter you got my appreciation author 🤜
I can't see the pic... is there a bug ?
no problem, am anticipating tomorrow
Author please must continue this work, it's just awesome .I can't wait for tomorrow to see more
lol authors name 🤣🤣