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Concubinebeauty

Concubinebeauty

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A fun loving gal who has an obsession with all things asian. HMU on Instagram - concubine_beauty

2021-07-06 JoinedGlobal
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty1yr
    Posted

    So firstly, the writing quality is good and it's easy to understand the development of the story. Within 4 chapters, we can already see some adaption to the situation from the main character. However, there really is a lot of plot armour. Too many things happen by coincidence - l don't know whether this is good or bad but it's something to keep in mind. Apart from that, the world background is fairly simple but what makes the story stand out is the style of writing - it's very lighthearted and conversational. Really makes you feel like you're hearing a story instead of reading one. The character design is very good - it's very endearing to see a system story where the main character is not too overpowered from the start. I'm definitely going to keep reading this story to see how things go.

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    A villain's path to being a white lotus
    Fantasy · SpicyChickenWriter
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty1yr
    Commented

    Good start! It's a really interesting concept! The writing may be a little hard to understand at times but overall I'm really interested to see how everything develops.

    Ch 1 Campus World
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    A villain's path to being a white lotus
    Fantasy · SpicyChickenWriter
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Replied to KazuhiroSeijuro

    Well said!

    Ch 20 Task one
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    Unfortunate Lives system
    Fantasy · Concubinebeauty
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Replied to KazuhiroSeijuro

    Her parents didn't leave the house - when l wrote family members, l meant like extended family members e.g aunts, uncles

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    Unfortunate Lives system
    Fantasy · Concubinebeauty
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    The writing is really good and the author does a great job when writing the characters. The setting is also very unique and up to where l read, everything was really shrouded in mystery. The only thing l don't understand is how the relationship between the male and female protagonists can improve so fast. Anyways, l highly recommend this for those who like romance.

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    Reincarnated as a Duke's Fiancé
    Fantasy · _Meggie_
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Replied to KazuhiroSeijuro

    Mei Qinghua is supposed to be in middle school but because she 'has no money', she's getting tutored at home. Most of her money is spent on clothes, makeup etc so that she looks expensive and fits in with the rich people

    Furthermore, her background is very shady and it cannot be investigated easily - who would believe that a little girl who hasn't even gone to middle school can make connections so coincidentally with the sons of very powerful families? Such a thing cannot be a coincidence.
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    Unfortunate Lives system
    Fantasy · Concubinebeauty
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    Shameless review from myself - it's worth reading that's for sure! Just take a look and you will enjoy it immensely~ Also, thanks to everyone who has supported me!

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    Unfortunate Lives system
    Fantasy · Concubinebeauty
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    This setting is really interesting - l love the realism elements. I find myself sympathising with Noe at every turn and the fact that he is so rejected by the world. There is so much mystery and intrigue and the author writes brilliantly. This novel is like an uncut diamond gradually being moulded into shape! Truly amazing!

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    Devil Child
    LGBT+ · SEP1A
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    This is really interesting! What really caught me was the picture for the book! The concept is really unique and it gives me anime-like vibes. Good work author and l can't wait to read on and see!

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    Izuka
    Fantasy · Anotoki
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    This is such a good book! I actually couldn't help myself and Solana is really a gem! Everything is written so seamlessly and l am really rooting for her - l hope she achieves her dreams!

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    My Time To Shine
    Urban · KazuhiroSeijuro
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    The first few chapters of the book are really well written and they drew me in quickly. The author also builds a sense of mystery and l have so many questions that need answers. I found myself sympathising a lot with Miran and Reyna as well! Well done!

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    The Isle of Guardians
    Fantasy · d_nmalory
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Replied to modestbaddie

    Oh no - l don’t mind - I was just trying to point out the fact that the imperial palace has rules and etiquette that people have to abide by - including the emperor

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    Flowers, Crowns and love
    History · modestbaddie
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    This is really well written - it's quite fast-paced and got my heart racing every time l thought the MC's real identity would be revealed. It's also good to see that the MC isn't completely dehumanised - she doesn't kill for the sake of killing and she acted according to her own morals. Good job author!

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    Ride Or Die With Me
    Fantasy · Eshal_Shahnawaz
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    It is really funny that the MC got reincarnated as a leech. I think the author has written the book well considering English isn't their first language! The setting of the novel is also very interesting because it seems the whole world experienced reincarnation. It has great potential!

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    Will of chaos
    Fantasy · Pendragon_DNT
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Replied to Thieving

    It’s 120 points at least - its the bare minimum.

    The teacher didn't respond at all and gave Bai Lianhua more demerits. She needed 120 merits to finish that semester and if she couldn't get them, she would have to repeat the class. Just now the teacher removed 5 points which meant her current points were 135 merits. This teacher is too much!
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    Unfortunate Lives system
    Fantasy · Concubinebeauty
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    The story is well written with good descriptive language that really immerses the reader - l felt like l was in another world. The most impressive thing is the setting - it is very unique and interesting and l can say that l have never read anything like it. The story has great potential and I'll be reading every update when it comes out! The only drawback for me is the fact that the MC feels a bit too OP at the start. He is already at level 0 mortal at 5 years of age yet his sister who is 30 has reached level 3. Maybe the author should slow the progression so that it doesn't feel as though the MC is easily getting through things.

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    Iron Blood
    Fantasy · Thieving
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    Pure gold - this story is well written with the perfect mix of humour - nothing gets old and l kept laughing with each chapter l read. It is also an interesting plot twist that the MC got a farmer role instead of the hero. I've already added this to my collection!

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    Legendary Farmer Class
    Fantasy · Smart_Dog
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    It's the humour for me - l died from the very beginning because of laughter! The writing has improved from the first chapter and l am sure it will get even better! Good job!

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    Evolution to GOD
    Urban · REaper
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    This is really good! Great writing and all the characters are more than 1D - they have motivations and feelings. Also, the author does a great job of showing rather than telling. I had to add this to my collection because it's just that good. I laughed a lot while reading it!

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    Daily Life Trapped in a Zombie VR Game
    Games · Anotoki
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  • Concubinebeauty
    Concubinebeauty2yr
    Posted

    The story is really good and from where l stopped reading, the characters were developing well! The idea of having a time system is really novel and unique! I hope the author continues to write more. It would be good to maybe reformat and edit the earlier chapters a bit more though.

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    My Time System
    Fantasy · Itsuki_Suzuki
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