Concubinebeauty
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So firstly, the writing quality is good and it's easy to understand the development of the story. Within 4 chapters, we can already see some adaption to the situation from the main character. However, there really is a lot of plot armour. Too many things happen by coincidence - l don't know whether this is good or bad but it's something to keep in mind. Apart from that, the world background is fairly simple but what makes the story stand out is the style of writing - it's very lighthearted and conversational. Really makes you feel like you're hearing a story instead of reading one. The character design is very good - it's very endearing to see a system story where the main character is not too overpowered from the start. I'm definitely going to keep reading this story to see how things go.
Her parents didn't leave the house - when l wrote family members, l meant like extended family members e.g aunts, uncles
The writing is really good and the author does a great job when writing the characters. The setting is also very unique and up to where l read, everything was really shrouded in mystery. The only thing l don't understand is how the relationship between the male and female protagonists can improve so fast. Anyways, l highly recommend this for those who like romance.
Mei Qinghua is supposed to be in middle school but because she 'has no money', she's getting tutored at home. Most of her money is spent on clothes, makeup etc so that she looks expensive and fits in with the rich people
This setting is really interesting - l love the realism elements. I find myself sympathising with Noe at every turn and the fact that he is so rejected by the world. There is so much mystery and intrigue and the author writes brilliantly. This novel is like an uncut diamond gradually being moulded into shape! Truly amazing!
This is really well written - it's quite fast-paced and got my heart racing every time l thought the MC's real identity would be revealed. It's also good to see that the MC isn't completely dehumanised - she doesn't kill for the sake of killing and she acted according to her own morals. Good job author!
It’s 120 points at least - its the bare minimum.
The story is well written with good descriptive language that really immerses the reader - l felt like l was in another world. The most impressive thing is the setting - it is very unique and interesting and l can say that l have never read anything like it. The story has great potential and I'll be reading every update when it comes out! The only drawback for me is the fact that the MC feels a bit too OP at the start. He is already at level 0 mortal at 5 years of age yet his sister who is 30 has reached level 3. Maybe the author should slow the progression so that it doesn't feel as though the MC is easily getting through things.