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  • Abyss_123
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    Yk, I took a break from this fic thinking that this guy will be over Raticates death after what, 300 chaps? Kinda disappointing he’s still hung up over this.

    "I... I can't move on from Raticate's death," he confessed.
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    Pokémon : An Unexpected Journey
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  • Abyss_123
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    Thanks for the chapter!

    AN:
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    Dragonlord (HP × ASOIAF)
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  • Abyss_123
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    How idiotic, if Stannis had legitimized Edric and married Shireen to him, he would have gotten the Hammer in his line’s clutches in a couple generations. Making him be a Kingsguard would literally render the hammer useless. But I guess in the grand scheme of things, the hammer will belong to Harry in the end.

    Ch 98 Chapter 98: Hammerfall
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    Dragonlord (HP × ASOIAF)
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  • Abyss_123
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    *if you are who you say you are

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    Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)
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  • Abyss_123
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    Thanks for the story, really enjoyed it

    **** The End ****
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    Daeron the Worthy (Jon Snow SI)
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  • Abyss_123
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    Rest in Peace Legend 🙏🏽

    Ch 467 Author Note: Tribute
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    Pokémon : An Unexpected Journey
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  • Abyss_123
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    +1

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    Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin
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    +1

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    Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin
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  • Abyss_123
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    You need the og gods consent when changing familia.

    Finally, Hephaestus rolled her eyes and grumbled. "Damned problem children... It's always my smiths whoring and causing drunken disturbances... Why can't they just kill someone like my friend's problem children." Hephaestus almost whined weakly making me snort but I smiled as she stood up with a grunt of effort as she looked down at Tina who was just above my waist. "Alright girly, turn around so I can unbutton the top of your dress so I can give you my Falna," Hephaestus said with a small smile at Tina quickly turning around so Hephaestus could unsnap the green buttons that held the back of Tina's dress closed.
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    My Upgrades are Invincible. Rewrite
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  • Abyss_123
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    There’s no such thing as a half Amazon, You are either a Amazon or you aren’t. Tsubaki is. Half human.

    Tsubaki Collbrande also had a more voluptuous frame, and combined with her aesthetic being half amazon and supposedly dwarf her darker skin contrasted with Hephaestus's pale skin with their eye patches being on opposite sides of their faces.
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    My Upgrades are Invincible. Rewrite
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  • Abyss_123
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    Yay, he’s joining a familia

    I was still scared that a god or goddess would see my cheat and fuck with it in order to mess with me. But in the end, I realized that trying to overturn Orario's whole structure in being a solo adventurer was a fool's dream as although yes my cheat was great. But it didn't make me some kind of powerhouse from the get-go.
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  • Abyss_123
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    "Yup, and he's a whiny mess over it just like you," Daiki snorted, "I'll tell you the same thing I told him when I was teaching him how to use his power not long ago. Be proud of who and what you are. You should be, being a Jinchuuriki makes you inherently superior to normal ninja from the get go. And if you are proud of it and wear like an armour, it can never be used to hurt you. Don't brandish it like a sword."
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  • Abyss_123
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    (This chapter is dedicated to all those who are alone for Christmas and have nothing better to do 👍🏻)
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    Lost in Sothoryos | A Game of Thrones fanfic
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  • Abyss_123
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    Thanks for the chap! I would suggest rereading the draft to fix some spelling mistakes.

    Ch 82 82. Nature of the Element
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    Avatar: A lost survivor on Pandora
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  • Abyss_123
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    Literally Math IB

    Harry could tell that the pace she chose for the class was far higher than that of the other classes. The frankly insane assignment that Vector assigned was proof of that. Arithmancy, in general, was challenging. The learning curve was very steep and not could follow that.
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    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
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  • Abyss_123
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    Thanks for the chapter! A suggestion, you can use AI to correct some of the grammer mistakes in the chapter. While I love the story, the grammer makes it hard to immerse myself in it. Just a suggestion though.

    Ch 81 81. Gods walking among Mortals
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  • Abyss_123
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    Replied to Jibberflex

    He changed it after I mentioned it.

    He had been severely reprimanded for taking such a huge risk. Yet he had succeeded where her fellow silent sisters and even the best of maesters had given up. For that, she owed him a great debt. A debt that she had tried to repay when she had tried to plead with her grandfather to end his exile. Yet the old kind had not budged. Intent on having Aenys learn his lesson, and then the news had come of him claiming a dragon.
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    The Healer Prince : HOTD SI
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  • Abyss_123
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    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 52 Chapter 51: Dragons at Winterfell
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    Daeron the Worthy (Jon Snow SI)
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  • Abyss_123
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    Thabks for the chapter, just one thing that can be worked on is the grammer and sentence structure. I’m getting a headache trying to read the sentences.

    Ch 73 73. The All-Father
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  • Abyss_123
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    Ah ok, so it’s just his assumption and z it a clear cut fact then in Harry’s mind

    It was both amusing and depressing to see how easily the man got away with it. Sure, technically Harry had him by the balls because if he revealed that there was, in fact, a Basilisk, the headmaster would lose a lot of goodwill from the public, and possibly his position as headmaster. But Harry wouldn't risk it; Dumbledore would kill him. He had proven that he was willing to do it when he did it to Flamel and Harry wasn't willing to risk it.
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    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
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