Sloth_on_a_branch
Aspiring author. I wish to put out amazing work for people who take the time to read what I put out. I don’t wish to disappoint so any feedback nice or not is absolutely welcome. I love you all
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Personally haven’t seen one that keeps the duke alive so I’d like to see that for a change personally IF it works for the story you want to make. If not kill him off like you would need to. I think Damon could use a genuine father since yeah we know he was raised fremen and by 2 elders they’re still not his parents ya know and I think that would be a issue in his and Paul’s relationship. Love what you’re doing man please don’t drop lol
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