Trittonchik

At the time of writing, 15 chapters have been read. Mediocre. The protagonist is not a person. He is a vessel into which various cliched qualities have been stuffed. Cold-blooded, self-confident, brilliant, a master of acting and, probably, seduction. He is at the level of third-rate villains. The hero literally has no backstory. It is literally visited in the phrase "He lived and died." The death of the protagonist at the very beginning has no meaning and value. As if he did not die, but stumbled. The goal of the protagonist is an empty shell. He wants to remake the world. What does not suit him in the current one? What does he want to change? What was the motivation and reason? What kind of world does he want to make? Barbieland? Maybe. And lastly. This is a subjective claim. I'm tired of it, it is very convenient for reincarnation. The killer will get into a world where you have to kill. The cook will get into a world where you have to cook, etc. The protagonist wants to remake the world and ends up in the body of a character who gets a powerful quirk. But for some reason, this wasn't enough for the author and he decided to add a system. He needed it so much. He was already coping with achieving his goal in his past life without superpowers. Maybe it will get better. Or maybe not. I don't want to keep eating this rotten pizza in the hope that it will get better.

An extremely mediocre work. The protagonist is formulaic and does not arouse interest. He won everywhere, he's good at everything and the author sucks at him. There are almost no funny or funny moments.

I don't quite understand how by copying DNA one can obtain the memory and knowledge of the owner of the DNA.Then why didn't he get cat and a dog memory?

This piece smells like trash.Maybe things will get better.

After thinking about the topic of cheats in the world of pure non-magical cyberpunk, I came to one conclusion. It's very hard to come up with something. The system always gives a simple answer, where does the protagonist get his powers from. Even in this fanfiction, you can pull the answer to why Tadano has all the abilities twice as high as the norm. But in cyberpunk without a system and magic, everything is limited by technology. The strongest cheat is even more advanced technology. But here we must ask the question: Where did the protagonist get them from? And the system has always made it easy.

There is one more thought. You said you didn't want to make a protagonist with a system, but could he have had one before the story began? The protagonist received some power behind the scenes thanks to her, and then, at the very beginning of the story, she will say: "Thank you for using it. Goodbye."

You can make the protagonist in a past life a magician or a cultivator (chuckle). It will be somewhat reminiscent of the game Sadowrun return.

As an option on the topic of cheats, you can give the hero some kind of psychokinetic abilities. There is an idea to make gg not a man, but AI, which will take control of technology. This is something similar to the manga Spirit Migration.

Will you delete the chapters already released? Please don't do this.

It seems to me that Ainz, even in the original, is not as careful as here.