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Orlando_Camacho_1482

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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14821yr
    Replied to Blitzo

    good

    Speaking of the hall, during his mother's and Parnakka's interaction, Artaxerxes had been getting a better look at his surrounding now that he was out of his crib. And to say the least, he was very impressed. What he saw must have been a gargantuan effort of human craftsmanship, Where my crib lay, oddly out of place, was an immense square hall with 36 columns supporting an enormous roof of cedar wood. Just above him, the intricately carved pillars seemed to stretch outward into an abyss, reaching staggering 20 meters in height. There were three porticoes each with twelve columns on the north, west, and east side. Four four-story corner towers, and a series of storage and guardrooms to the south. To the north and east beyond the rows of columns was an open courtyard teeming with fauna and wildlife. There seemed to be enough room to hold 10,000 people.
    Achaemenid Empire
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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14821yr
    Replied to LulzLowKey

    I hope you will continue to tell me where I have grammatical and pronoun errors or any errors to improve my writing.

    ANCESTRAL SPIRIT
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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14821yr
    Replied to LulzLowKey

    because

    When I turned 20 I decided to join the army since I had the status of a patrician, and thanks to production and the agrarian reform the population increased, this fact made the king who was in power able to lead troops and wage wars calmly.
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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14821yr
    Replied to LulzLowKey

    ok, I already fix it

    Luodico was thinking that after waking up like him he would call his son to organize and get the news from outside.
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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14821yr
    Replied to LulzLowKey

    remember in history that ancus marcius was a king known for being pacifist and kind, so I write as if the senators and nobles were bad.

    Although the patriarchs and senators did not like the way I did it and thanks to this decision the alphabet and words were created faster and they only wanted it so that the commoners and the serfs could not learn it, but thanks to the current king that he remained calm.
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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14821yr
    Replied to LulzLowKey

    luodico dustin does not recognize as king since he is barely 5 years old, he was also sealing the Latin alphabet to be able to get food.

    After twisting and turning to be able to survive and not be sold into slavery, I learned Latin, and although the illiterate Latin was barely being born, I already knew how to recognize some letters, so when I learned the language I worked teaching the common people the alphabet and the vocabulary to exchange for food and other rare items.
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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14821yr
    Replied to akira3

    No, the truth is I don't know novels of this style, but if there are family ancestral systems and not dynastic or that build kingdoms

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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14822yr
    Replied to akira3

    Yes, since the names are not very common, and many people do not use them, for the next chapters I will only use the title that is (god of the earth and so on) although it is not used much, but this way it becomes more pleasant and understandable , Thank you

    Ch 5 religion of my empire
    mexican empire
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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14822yr
    Replied to Orlando_Camacho_1482

    and the kingdom is tututepec so they use it as a reference

    Ch 3 Tenochca empire
    mexican empire
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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14822yr
    Commented

    With this map of the empire and its neighbors it can help you to position yourself better, I hope you like it tomorrow there will be a new one, you can comment on any opinion that helps me improve.

    Ch 3 Tenochca empire
    mexican empire
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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14822yr
    Commented

    que formas de hacer eso

    Ch 121 Casual Talk
    When Cats Own Superpower
    Urban · Bear Wolf Dog
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  • Orlando_Camacho_1482
    Orlando_Camacho_14822yr
    Commented

    muy ingenioso el protagonista

    Gambling!
    The Entire Mankind is Acting As Me, I Shall Secretly Build a Battleship and Shock the World
    Urban · Two Langya Brothers
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