True_SwordMaster

I get that chakra is inner energy, but the Tokyo Ghoul world doesn't have a chakra system. So even if it's internal, how is it being generated or maintained? The author needs to explain how chakra works in this world, or if there's a special reason Madara's abilities still function.

Nope, it is correct lol. I just asked ChatGPT about the difference between a dark character and a scumbag MC who manipulates pretty girls in life-or-death situations.

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The author should just change the description from 'Dark MC' to 'Creep MC' to avoid any confusion or complaints about that scumbag MC. A true dark character would be someone like Aizen from Bleach or Madara from Naruto, both are powerful, ruthless, and calculated, but they have depth and purpose behind their actions. This MC, on the other hand, is just a creep adding pretty girls to his collection to satisfy his desires. Lol

Yeah, I admit it's a dark MC, but his attitude is still annoying. It’s one thing to be ruthless, but he treats women like toys, which just makes him feel like a creep rather than a well-written dark character.

The description says in this fic in the last part "Simple. Absolutely nothing," but that doesn’t mean he should just stand by when his own parents' lives are at risk. It’s one thing to ignore random strangers, but his own family? If he has the power to save them and still chooses not to, that’s just pure selfishness. If you were in his place, would you really be able to just watch your parents or siblings die without doing anything?

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