MeliMeli

The first 20 chapters had promise. After that it’s just downhill. The author manages to make every single character in the entire story unlikeable. Everyone has the same 1 dimensional personality. Everyone has the same personality traits. They’re all closed with different names. Plot? I guess there is a plot but it’s so drowned in ever chapter being 90% insults that are just the same over and over and over. Honestly the premise and the start is what had me dead the first 130 chapters in the hopes that it would be good again. Imo reading this is a waste of time, unless it gets a major overhaul and actual character design.

I’m sorry but this is just infuriating. Sure I understand you want to build suspense with the “father” and the princess, but it’ just the same thing over and over and over. Apparently the girl is the worlds biggest idiot and masochist, and she doesn’ get any better. She doesn’t stand up for herself and she lets her friends be tortured. She literally has 0 reason not to kill the king and take the crown for herself, she already has the support of the people, another kingdom and the rest of the royal family and most of its generations retainers. There is slow progression and then there is no progression, the first 45 chapters literally has no progression. I love the opconcept, but the execution leaves a lot to be wanted. I hope the author rewrites this as it has the chances to be really really good.