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I am 19 years old I have 15 books 30+ short stories 3 video game layouts I have a self help guide I plan on getting my work turned into movie adaptations eventually.

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  • Goke_black
    Goke_black4mth
    Replied to ItBeLikeThat

    lol yeah always take action before others can take something that you want away from you.

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    The Story of John you were wanting to do
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  • Goke_black
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    Replied to Nickjr321

    That is a more recent book of mine that I had written last year and am now typing up and publishing I have plenty of other books that you might want to check out as they are free at the moment it would be wise to take advantage of that while you can and I also have plenty of unpublished work as well in fact everything that I have published up till now is just the tip of the iceberg.

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    Goke_black4mth
    Replied to Nickjr321

    your welcome did you enjoy reading it?

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    Goke_black4mth
    Replied to KleiNightwriter

    No problem glad that it helped you

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    formula for life
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  • Goke_black
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    lol sorry about that I can't think of any good names that I won't get sued for using

    John leaves along with Sarah when Jackson finds them Jackson says "You two are strong come fight me" John and Sarah clashed against Jackson Jackson defeats both of them than says "Your both very skilled warriors respect we should do this again sometime" Jackson leaves allowing John and Sarah alive. Two days later John's depression began no longer able to hide from it alone he says "You don't know what you have until it's gone" John gradually weakens as loss regret and other emotions begin to take over two weeks later he had already lost a fourth of himself. A year after that tragic day Sarah and the Unicorn girl sit together "Jade what I do you think?" Jade says "He's too dangerous to approach" Sarah says "Agreed" John had long since lost himself Rage insanity emptiness bloodlust have taken over turning him into a savage beast he has become thousands of times more powerful and dangerous but lacks his usual warrior self now he is just a brute force animal. One day a powerful legendary Monster attacks Sarah and the Unicorn girl Jade. Sarah and Jade find it an unbeatable foe without any good weapons or tough armor they are in trouble however John saves them and fights the monster. The overwhelming power of the Monster is immensely greater but the savage John's power quickly grows as does his emotions that fuel his savagery. John's savagery evolves overtime as it continues increasing fueled by the wild emotions within him. Soon all trace of John's humanity vanishes becoming a fully savage beast however than came a new evolved version of John's wild emotions.
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  • Goke_black
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    Replied to ItBeLikeThat

    lol the story is supposed to focus on the psychological aspects as he keeps losing everyone his sanity is reduced and he goes further to the point of insanity

    Emily finds John and Jackson John has beaten Jackson and prepares to deliver the finishing blow when Emily says "Wait John!' All of John's dead compannions appear "JOIN US" They each stab John in the chest before going away Emily says "It's over John" John says "Your right it ends here and now" John finishes off Jackson causing them both to go over the edge of the waterfall. Emily is frozen stunned before reacting she screams out "JACKSON NO!" Emily jumps over the side of the waterfall both John and Jackson are about to hit the rocks. Emily has to decide which one she values more John as a soldier in her army or her brother's life. Emily saves her brother and as a result losess John Emily brings Jackson up stream to find that he is not breathing she says "HEALERS TO ME!" Emily's army of healers appear she says "SAVE MY BROTHER!" Emily's army of healers heal Jackson saving him he wakes up Emily wraps her arms around Jackson and says "Don't scare me like that again brother" Jackson says "Ok sis let's go home" Emily and Jackson return to base Jackson says "Max you and Lola survived congradulations now rest for whats to come your going to need it" Four days later John is pulled out of the river by a girl and her father "Dad what happened to him?" The man says "He survived a real brutal encounter" Meanwhile Emily approches Jackson and says "What happened?" Jackson says "I underestimated him I need to undo the seal" Jackson breaks the seal unleahing his true might which even Emily's minnions fear immensely Jackson says "Next time there will be no mercy one of us will die" Emily says "That's good to hear"
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  • Goke_black
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    Replied to ItBeLikeThat

    originally Jade did not even exsist I added her in the 2.0 version after some thought

    However she was fortunate enough to be at that tribe at this time and she was named Jade. At this time an individual was on a journey this indivual was named as Rogue and was believed to be the single greatest mercenary that even five Jade's would be beaten in a battle Rouge had stumbled upon the tribe and had taken an interest in Jade so they became Jade's instructor and mentor. At the age of seven years old monsters had invaded John's home village. John had fought desperately the fighting for his life rekindled the battle instinct and DNA lost to his ancestors through peace resulting in the birth of a warrior cultivated by thousands of generations of war. The young John killed all of the monsters unfortunately he was the sole survivor. God says "What was that? He was like a tornado killing all foes?" John skinned the monsters and wore their fur for clothes and used their bones for weapons and he had began to live in the woods.John's magic lessons were incomplete and he couldn't really use any magic yet so in the world that utilized magic John had utilized battle without magic. Jade had managed to kill a Dragon at the age of 4 thanks to her lessons from her mentor she had managed to amplify her fighting capabilities by enhancing her energy reserves and energy recovery as well as working on her energy manipulation and her combat skills and thanks to her mentor Jade was able to further excel
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  • Goke_black
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    as absoultely amazing in my opinion I think you might have talent although I am unable to determine how much talent but you definitely have potentail

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    Dread Tales
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  • Goke_black
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    ultimately I enjoyed reading the story you get a 99% score out of a 100% I finished reading it the details and descriptions were great the only issue was the small grammer issues otherwise it was perfect.

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    The Last Twila
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