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Oof... If I had talked to my father that way when I was a kid he would've tanned my hide
they can't? I know Koichi from The Vigilantes series got in trouble for using his quirk in public (he was using it to get around in lieu of just walking) but Bakugo used his against the slime and I don't remember him getting in trouble for that.
*you're
*snort* now I'm picturing Gilgamesh as a chef
Please stop using that phrase
What am I looking at??
Is he gonna get a sword or is he gonna stick to knives? Cause swords have better reach and is just generally better at killing things with
Didn't they have a kid together?
My my such expressive eyes you have...
Ouch
One of the most well-thought-out and well-executed fanfic I have read on this site. The grammar is great. I can actually understand you without needing a rosetta stone, unlike most of the stories I've read here. Some minor, and I do mean minor, spelling mistakes. The plot is coherent, there are no glaring plotholes that I've noticed. The discourse is good too. You're not gonna win a Pulitzer anytime soon but it is far from bad. Usually seeing an MC being nerfed annoys me to no end but in this one, it doesn't because it made sense plot-wise. The MC has some level of depth instead of just being a caricature and I look forward to seeing how his character will develop. I really hope you won't ignore the other characters as well. Overall a solid story. Good job![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]