Its really well written, its like I'm getting pulled to read more, it's really amazing, keep up the good work, I'll definitely recommend this [img=recommend]
its a 5 out of 5 for me, it's really cool, when he describe thing the author do it really slowly it build up tension and that fact is really satisfied, Thank u, and Keep up the good Work^^
The plot of the story is good, you just just need to improve your writing quality , but overall its amazing, looking forward to this, keep up the good work!
it's really cool, it hooked me from the very start, its unique and it has a nice plot, Ill be waiting for more updates, So keep up the good work author!