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Exiled

Author: KenShimizu
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Read Exiled novel written by the author KenShimizu on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Fantasy stories, covering action, adventure, reincarnation, comedy. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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“In a place where gods live there is a ranking that can distinguish your authority, a rising god named Alvis, was a newly formed god of Strategy, formed 230 year, however being newly formed he has ranked high-silver, thanks to his expertise, being able to step within top-silver, made other gods wary of his existence, but unable to do anything because of the heavenly pledge, During his 250th anniversary, because of this a phoenix dropped by a golden scroll saying Alvis is to be promoted to Mid-Class, a Class where you will be rewarded with your own planet, which made others extremely wary of him and other started making speculation of him leaching of gods of higher ranking, with his position being at risk, as soon as Alvis received his new badge a planet was transported to him, Type 1653-Earth, a place where there are living beings are able to survive, he can change the conditions, the information or create creatures that can adopt and to the circumstances of the planet, as soon as this info was given to him he started reshape it into a game like world.” *please understand that the english here is really messy, because it's not my first language, this is also my first time writing, please point out something if its wrong*

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Hey, dear readers before I start with the Synopsis i want to give you some informations which would be important if you're interested in my story: - I'm a teenager who lives in germany but is originally georgian (the country) and italian so english is not my first language, if there will be any mistakes please let me know - I have started to write 3 story's around the year 2020 in december which are not complete but I'll finish them if I'll have the inspiration. All of 3 story's are written in germany. This story is my 4 th story in english as you can already tell.. Obviously - This story contains mature theme not only but also ab*usem*nt, se*, discr*min*tion and so on. So if you aren't made for these things or just don't tolerate these themes I'd rather you not to read my story for good only.. if you know what I'm trying to say. Thank you that was everything for now :) -Synopsis- Imagine to be a 14 year old girl in a small village in the middle of nowhere you could say. This town is excluded from the outside world. No big electricity connection. No contact to the other town cities. She gets abused every day since she's 7 years old and still she tries to face this misterious and misunderstood world. Her mother blames her for his brother and father leaving. Meanwhile her future is waiting for her she will become that what her. Everything happens for a reason even if it's not meant to be. Will she survive? And find out what the future has prepared for her? Will she get justice in the world? Will she get revenge? And will be able to help those peoples in need and eventually find her missing brother and father? Who knows?... A new chapter starts.. Now! ----------------->

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KenShimizu
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Hi Guys! if you enjoyed this, add it to your library it'll make me the happiest! [img=recommend] Thank you for Checking and have a nice day!

maverick_maya
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Your plot is amazing. There is a lot of space for improvement which I'm sure you will go through easily. The complexity of the plot might be hard which I hope you can keep up with and keep going. All the best!

DAIOSITS
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This is a really good story, however, given how hard and complex the story already is, it might be hard to develop the story correctly. I hope the next chapters will not be bad because of that

d_nmalory
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Good start on the book,the complexity of the plot is something I hope you are prepared for because this story needs justice. Check on the small grammar mistakes but otherwise keep it up.

JohnDoer
JohnDoerLv5JohnDoer

Well. The idea is wonderful and so huge, original. I mean, it can be developed into something very interesting. Is this Earth our Earth? Will all the people acquire a game system cause of this new god? It's just the grammar that confuses the reader. Also, i see you have the same problem with overusing the word "then" just like me. I would suugest you to delete the unnecessary ones as I always do when final editing. This word, it just slows down the pace. Overall. Interesting work with a potential to become something big! Just keep it up!

Rhi_
Rhi_Lv1Rhi_

i really like your concept its just really cool but i wish u put more into it, like a goal like the other commenter said, it's like his just running around without q goal but obtaining skill, but i really like it, keep it up!

kuhaku_sora
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I really love the concept of your story! However, there are few things that I'd like to ask and point out. In your story, you must have a stake for the main character, and something the readers would sympathise about. It needs to be urgent and a goal for the main portagonist to obtain. English is a very difficult and peculiar subject, so I advise you to read your chapters out loud and learn all the techniques needed to make a story. Besides that, I hope you learned something with my review and comments I left in the chapter!

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