Finally found a good genshin fanfic that has good writing, clear storytelling, and good pacing. Honestly hope you dont drop this is too good and cant wait to see the next chapters

For some reason i thought it was like kokushibous sword style

The story progresses pretty well and the characters all feel real like real people but my only problem is that it doesn't really tell me a lot about the world that the MC is reincarnated in this might be a personal preference but I really like world building when it done right and this story have done it pretty well but it could be a little but more detailed no hate tho