elizabethe_eagles

oh my, I remember you saying that you didn't feel well. I hope it's not anything too serious. I have a little bit of medical background if there's anything I can help you with

the end!!! write book 2 now!!!!!! Please!!!

even though it was difficult she has gotten used to her

well done Meta on the transition from the people on the planet at the factories view of what was going on with the attacks to the view of Nora and her husband's. I usually get a little bored when there has to be a complete replay of a situation took coming from two different blocks of people but you did this very well and so much thought had to go into all those tactical details. I'm amazed

author, I feel like your story is going to be really cute but your pronouns are all over the place with being incorrect it makes that first couple chapters so difficult to read. please get yourself some editing so that your book can be great

they're so close to this family. and help each other so much. I would think they would have made accommodations for them to come live in the apartment building by now

oh my. what the heck. I got to the end and now I have to wait for chapters. darn darn darn. well I'm committed to the end.

ah yes the lighter that's what it was. I wonder how much trouble that lighter could be later on, like in a second novel or something

I don't think I ever caught reading why that clan was trying to abduct Leilani. I know they everyone was mad because she was on the side of males being protected and that she was being very verbal about it but I was having to assume that that clan was just angry that she was acting differently than all the other matriarchs. and that might be why they were going to abduct her to try to brainwash her into being more like them again. but that's just my assumption

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