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Light_Ray1mthCommentedMonkey D Luffy 😂
"Oh, won't you look at that!" Hadeon exclaimed in an excited voice upon seeing Mallory's picture there with the caption below, 'Dead or Alive'.- Light_Ray2mthCommented
Omg Lol, this reminds me when I was in high school, one girl tried to ruin my white skirt by her muddy shoes . All I saw was RED. I slapped her hard and pulled her hair tight😛😛 After all it's such a headache to wash the white clothes 😔 Btw I am re reading this 5th time, until bati gets updated 🎊🎊And still it's so much fun to read this story again and again
Ch 11 Warning of the Ghost - Light_Ray2mthCommented
The plot seems nice so far. But I think it could have written more better. As of now the timelines are really confusing. You either keep everything in past, then present....or clearly mention in beginning if it is present or past. Because as I can remember in previous chapter it was mentioned everybody in Adrian's family knows about him, his sister fainted and stuff. Please take it as a constructive feedback, otherwise the plot is really good and I am liking it so far.
Ch 15 Chapter Fifteen: A Son For A Son. - Light_Ray3mthPosted
Omg, the book is so good, I couldn't keep it down. The chemistry between main leads is so heart swooning - ❣️❣️🔥🔥 Your way of writing is so awesome dear author. The way you play with words- amazing . There are quite a grammatical mistakes, but the plot and everything is so nice, that it can be overlooked. Could you please let us know approximately how much story is remaining, and when it would be complete, I would like to read everything in one sitting . Thankyou for such amazing novel 😊
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I don't understand, how come she can not realize they are same person. Voice, scent is same, Eliana should be smart enough to figure out?
"And for some reason, you think I'll tell you everything because? You are Mr. Marino's friend. Do you take me as a tool," Elliana asked. - Light_Ray9mthCommented
I was wondering, being a demon can he apparate?
Oasis galloped as fast as he could, the air rushing against them as they headed towards the dock, which was built along the sand and wide rock. But by the time they arrived, the port was empty. - Light_Ray1yrCommented
descendant of Acheron....means Acheron was married in previous years, and had kids?
A snicker left James's lips, and he said, "I was just curious as to why the last descendant of Acheron married a simple human." - Light_Ray1yrCommented
#rr 😂
His skilful fingers moved to the next button. It was Calhoun who had asked the tailor to design Madeline's clothes, wanting it to stand out compared to the rest of the people in and around Devon. He had got the dresses stitched not only with high-quality fabric which were attractive to look at but also easy to discard when needed. With one arm still around Madeline's waist, he leaned forward to take a deep breath of her scent, and she smelled heavenly. He didn't know if he would ever get to go to heaven, but this was what he believed heaven was like. - Light_Ray1yrCommented
second time reading this. lol I don't know why but sparrow gives me Bruno vibes from Enchanto movie.
Raphael looked surprised as Calhoun had never brought a lady in here to take a reading. Mr. Sparrow looked like a madman because of his dull face and droopy eyes. Because of his appearance, most of the people outside this building look at him like he was a drunk man. - Light_Ray1yrCommented
lol, I read stupid contractor 😂😂
[ This contract will last for three months. The Cupid Contractor and Human Contractee will work together in doing this mission. ] - Light_Ray1yrCommented
so what was stopping him from doing this all these years?
He got a whiff of her scent and followed after it immediately before she could end up in the hands of another vampire. Vincent also wanted to run into Minnie tonight so that he could repay her for trapping someone who did not belong to her. - Light_Ray1yrCommented
I like how smart female lead is .
That only raised a bunch of red flags in Aurora's mind. She hadn't forgotten the fact she was dealing with a witch. Something had to be wrong with the book for her to be given such a discount. - Light_Ray1yrCommented
*to her. dear author, I saw you said you don't have editor . For the time being, you can correct the pointed errors by readers, by yourself.
"Yes" she said with a doubtful voice when the man forwarded a letter to him. - Light_Ray1yrCommented
I don't know why but this Alice character is so annoying and stupid.
Alice ran behind the black-colored person. Whenever she felt that she was in the way of getting the hold of the person, he or she would take left or right, making her run around. - Light_Ray1yrCommented
they are getting to know now ? what were they doing these many years, enjoying palace luxurious ...like someone commented in previous chapter such a shallow characters so far . Also, this idea of randomly going there recklessly just for inspection, no planning nothing, it's like child's play. They don't deserve to become Queen.
Ch 7 Going away to death. - Light_Ray1yrCommented
The plot so far is nice, but a constructive feedback- your story doesn't give continuous flow, feels like some bits and pieces are missing. Secondly, as I am progressing further, there are so many grammatical mistakes, some times its third person view, and in same line, first person view, its irritating. But I liked the plot, so I will continue further & keep voting.
She stopped and then her shoulders sank. She turned around and Ladislas felt scared. The tender look that he had seen in her eyes was replaced by a coldness I didn't think she had in her. She looked furious and glared angrily at him. - Light_Ray1yrCommented
I am really confused, while leaving she was all ok with him, but now so scared
She wouldn't even make it to the headlines. She could definitely not kill this man and get away with it, considering that he had classes the next day and people would look for him. If she was caught, she would have nothing to say, her cover would be blown. But also, she could see that this man was acutely dangerous. Not in the serial killer kind of way, but something stranger and which made her animal instinct go wild when she was near him.