nope!

can you tell how. Would love to correct it.

hey! Maybe read the novel before reviewing? I hope you realise its nowhere related to that masterpiece. :> I hope you actually give the novel a try and change your review.

Nah nah! He was a warrior in his past life, so he does know the basic ways to scout. He doesnt have a skill for it, but he can still do the bare bones! The thing is, due to his equipment and class his physical are way too high for a mage. And dont worry, he is not the only strong person. I have been focussing only on him , but there will be two fun characters who are very strong that will be introduced :>

balls

Thank you so much! Every gift matters a lot, and I hope I can keep writing stuff enjoyable for you :>

yeah thats true! but as a passing comment its fine no?

okay. Will keep it in mind

I will edit the chapter and improve the wording. Dont worry.

No, let me explain. Tom used the sword which was enveloped in flames. You get what i mean?

Yep, university will be used to focus on the real world plot, and I intend to integrate some game-like elements in it. You will be able to guess it in few chapters, I hope you guys will like it.

I will keep it in mind! Thanks

hope you enjoying it ^^

Also , if you had some trouble reading this fight. Dont worry, the fights ahead are much more detailed. I might just go back and rework past chapters when I get time :>

No! I said that the monster is weak against magic attacks

no? Tom used a magic attack! When was he weak against them?

Everyday :>

Yes actually! I would upload 9:30 pm IST? IST is GMT + 5:30

Interesting and a Classic premise ! The writing quality is good, and would love to see where the novel proceeds from here. let him cook fr!

Okay so! I think a few punctuation errors here and there, but overall its a good beginning. I see a few Indian characters, and it seems like the novel may use elements from our history? Which is really exciting to see if the author does go that path. Good luck!