AstridStorm
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Nah nah! He was a warrior in his past life, so he does know the basic ways to scout. He doesnt have a skill for it, but he can still do the bare bones! The thing is, due to his equipment and class his physical are way too high for a mage. And dont worry, he is not the only strong person. I have been focussing only on him , but there will be two fun characters who are very strong that will be introduced :>
yeah thats true! but as a passing comment its fine no?
okay. Will keep it in mind
I will edit the chapter and improve the wording. Dont worry.
No, let me explain. Tom used the sword which was enveloped in flames. You get what i mean?
Also , if you had some trouble reading this fight. Dont worry, the fights ahead are much more detailed. I might just go back and rework past chapters when I get time :>
No! I said that the monster is weak against magic attacks
no? Tom used a magic attack! When was he weak against them?
Okay so! I think a few punctuation errors here and there, but overall its a good beginning. I see a few Indian characters, and it seems like the novel may use elements from our history? Which is really exciting to see if the author does go that path. Good luck!