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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu3mth
    Commented

    While I agree that the mc was too weak and with a very limited variety of spells, I think you should keep the chapter and use the event as a reality check for the mc, and from there he becomes more determined in how to use more lethal spells and also train your magical skills more.

    Ch 19 Question? (not a chapter)
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    A Wizard in Wednesday
    TV · a_BMO
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu3mth
    Replied to Raf_Bollen

    I don't understand the problem, magic exists in the world of Game of Thrones, mana is just another way of saying magic.

    "This would be tricky. I can give you the knowledge on the rituals but rituals are basically gaining something by sacrificing something. I believe you don't want to have any human or animal sacrifices right? But instead of this rituals will need sacrifice of magic or the mana of the Castor of ritual. Now that your 5 wishes are done have fun in your new world. As a bonus I will adjust system's status panel to accommodate all your wishes."-ROB said as he waved his hand.
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    GOT- In Winter, We Stand Together
    Book&Literature · Vencha
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu3mth
    Replied to OukisLips

    I think that magic refers to the world. I really hope that the MC doesn't have magic after all the Lanister family never gave any indication of having a magical lineage, like the Starks, Martells, Baratheons and Targaryens.

    Ch 6 Aggressive Negotiations
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    Flickering Light of the West (ASOIAF Jaime SI)
    Book&Literature · Tempest2077
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu3mth
    Commented

    Haya

    "Simple... solo diviérteme, como veras soy un Dios, puedo ver las vidas de los mortales en diferentes dimensiones, pero me gustaría que haiga una nueva variante en algún mundo que pueda entretenerme" dijo Dios sonriendo con diversión 
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    MHA: UCHIHA MADARA
    Anime & Comics · Madara_Uchiha00
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu3mth
    Commented

    God is such a Jaime Lannister fanboy that it's disgusting, letting him live brings you more problems than benefits

    Ch 19 The Archer of Death
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    Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)
    Video Games · SovereignOfHeaven
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu3mth
    Replied to DongLong

    HP:eagle soars

    AN - I wanted the MC to have a bit of a moment with Maria, he's not in love with her or anything but this small arc was necessary for his character growth... Speaking of which which house do you think Rigel would end up in?
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    Harry Potter: Ero World
    Book&Literature · light_novel_addict
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu4mth
    Commented

    I don't like the banner at all, it has too many things, wasn't it better to make the baratheon banner just with a purple background and maybe the shogun raiden symbols around the deer?

    Outside, I saw a peculiar banner hanging on the ship. It was split into four, the top left had the Baratheon's stag in gold on a black field (Bastard Baratheon), the top right had a black three-headed dragon on a field of red (Blackfyre/Bastard Targaryen), the bottom right was the Florent's fox but golden in a circle of flaming orange flowers and black field (Baratheon-fied Florent) and the bottom left was a black turtle on a red field (Targaryen-fied Estermont).
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    Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)
    Video Games · SovereignOfHeaven
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu4mth
    Replied to Dominic_Zibuda

    She is a character from the series, the Asian girl

    Devon stopped, struggled to catch her breath, and said, "Did you see how we messed them up? Just when one was trying to poke your eyes, I kicked him in the balls, hahaha!"
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    The Dragon Warrior.
    Movies · SrCuervo
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu4mth
    Commented

    An interesting proposal, I wonder if you plan to make him sail to the free cities as a mercenary, what better way to win an army. When you say that he is not interested in being king, would he still become the nobility of some house or create his own?

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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu5mth
    Replied to Koi2DragonKing

    Then he asks for the loan, calculating the time for the apocalypse to arrive before they start collecting payments.

    Ch 2 Chapter Two
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    Reborn Into The Walking Dead As Rick Grimes
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu5mth
    Commented

    I don't understand why you should break your head trying to start a business or invest, it's as simple as asking for a loan from the bank and your savings would be enough for the essentials.

    Ch 2 Chapter Two
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    Reborn Into The Walking Dead As Rick Grimes
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu6mth
    Commented

    rhaenys

    "it's cool, just like my father's knights.....yes I accept" Rhaenys
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    The fake samurai from Game of Thrones
    TV · LadyforSea
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu6mth
    Commented

    geppo, one piece

    I'm thinking about how to make MC fly, the ability to fly is necessary because there will be battles in the air.
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    Ten'yo Jubaku-DxD fanfic
    Anime & Comics · Oniichanishere
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu7mth
    Commented

    I really like your fic, but honestly I skipped all the "scientific" part of this chapter and only saw the end.

    Ch 34 Why Live?
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    Marvel : A Reptilian Adventure
    Anime & Comics · Marine0IQ
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu8mth
    Replied to Kotylion

    Yes, but you have to consider that, just like in our world, it was very normal to have children at that age, due to the short life expectancy in medieval times.

    People do marry with like twelve name days and women have children with fourteen, not that that is healthy, as is shown in the high mortality rate during birth.
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    Lannister's Sin of Pride
    TV · Cedric_7512
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu1yr
    Replied to Quinton1200

    very good anyway you have time to develop the romance after all the characters are 11 years old, so as long as you make the friendship and progress well until you reach some romance it can work out, after all it would be acceptable for them to start that type of relationship like in 3 or 4 years

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    In the Harry Potter world with a system
    Book&Literature · Quinton1200
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu1yr
    Replied to Quinton1200

    I have to say that I really like romance in the fic and those I read I hope they have it, will they have romance? I'm not asking for it to be the main theme of the fic, having it is enough for me. You should also avoid writing too many internal thoughts.

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    In the Harry Potter world with a system
    Book&Literature · Quinton1200
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu1yr
    Replied to Quinton1200

    You should avoid the walls of text, that's a great reason not to read a fic. You should add the harry potter tag. As for the system, as long as it sticks to the world of Harry Potter, not having a shop, porridge or anything like that, it can work well.

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    In the Harry Potter world with a system
    Book&Literature · Quinton1200
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu1yr
    Commented

    I really like your fic, but I skip the parts about being in skyrim. After all, I started reading it just because of the Harry Potter world, he didn't say that it's bad that they traveled to skyrim, but I seriously think it would be better than just They are to obtain the THU'UMS and that nothing more will be shown than the important fights such as bosses and perhaps some other challenges such as those of the claws to enter the tombs, etc

    Ch 65 New Skill
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    Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin
    Book&Literature · DreamyApe
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  • DxNatsu
    DxNatsu1yr
    Replied to SHEOGORATH

    Is the link okay? It sends me to a minecraft and roblox page

    (Here's a chapter for you guys! Three new chapter available in the Secret Cheese Society! Yup, you can read up to chapter 49 for free! Five Chapters Ahead Of Time!)
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    HP: Eagle Soars
    Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
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