hmmh, i want to help with the grammar, this novel is going good, author. can i have the permission to access it? i want to do some few editings, or just become ur personal proofreader.

what happened to momon....--- san

Dont worry man i like dialogues

well, ngl if im gay i would surely ho for jiwoo

Somehow this doesn't make sense

If i could i would have done it a long time agom

Didn't zero said previously, 'Leader?' Which means he "is" a former leader,

I have so many questions with the sudden time skip, The MC should be smart, He is the leader after all, And why would he think if turning himself in, If he's a assassin in his past life, There so many questions that is not answered, I feel so confused

There so many grammatical error, if you need proofreader, I'm free

Hah! Idiot, DIE!

Still waiting

Can ya atleast make an announcement that you wouldn't update it, were waiting, like i only open this app just to read this

Waiting for the next chapter

What happened to you author,,,,, What happened to the next chapter am eager to find a next chap pls update it soon

Lol, NO

Oh yeah, it's called plot

Author San, are you okay? You haven't updated for two days, Did you get sick?

Cool, fate merciless guy

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