And when I saw her collapse during the competition that day, it was as though the sky fell on me. We rushed her to the hospital and immediately agreed to all the necessary treatments.
Good. I like the story very much. Character is good. Action also good. Everything is good. Well done writer. Do not stop writing and publishing new chapters.
I like this story. I think it is well written and very funny. The caharcters are very cool. The twists are good. The description and background are really good.