JJstired

It is a wonderful story with great Grammar and Punctuation. Some stuff is repeated a little too much, but that is just a nitpick. One aspect is a little forced but that would be spoiling so ill just let you figure that out on your own. But at the end of the day It's a great read, and you will do yourself a favor by giving it a try.

Oh really, what would they call themselves then? I might change this than.

yeah okay bro, sorry I didn't make him a all knowing god who killed Jabba the Hutt took over all his military force and took over the galaxy with his previous knowledge of being a Green Beret on a non space fairing society. You truly are so wise 😭🎶😟🦗🤷‍♂️👀🤷‍♂️⏲️😟⏲️🦗🤷‍♂️🤷‍♂️🫶

screw Disney man truly.

i enjoyed reading your comments

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i love you bro

your mom when she saw you for the first time.

Maybe if you could try and understand a single ounce of literature that crosses your eyes, you could try to understand that he doesn't want to be an adult and that he has another chance to relive his childhood.

Yes, that is the fucking point, you idiot. He has an adult mind while trying to relive his childhood. Why read something if you are this stupid?