PaleRejent

Pretty good overall.

Better than most fics

Better grammar than most other stories on here, it's a good read.

Very rough start ngl, hope it would get better as more chapters come.

Tell me you're malay without telling me you're malay

Bro have you seen what i did in the 3 chapter? You got no rights to say that till you give a chapter as many powerstones as i have.

Thanks for the update

Lets get ths story to 200 chapters plus

Idk what to say except that this was very confusing to read.

Aged like milk lol