This is undoubtedly my favorite fanfic of all time, from all the fandoms. It's very long, it encompasses multiple verses, it's neither a shitty emo psychopath fantasy, nor wish-fulfillment trash, nor a happy-go-lucky fic made for 10 year olds. The MC is a VERY developed character, so are many of the side-cast. The fic explores all aspects of life; Politics, Morals and Ethics, Power progression etc. It's dark and optimistic at the same time, it makes the readers gloomy and laugh at the same time, it's just peak. I can't put into words how much I love this fic. The author is a genius, not only in terms of writing ability, but in other aspects too. His Author notes are always fun and enlightening, and something I look forward to when I finish the chapter. This fic is a Harem, which I usually DESPISE. However, SOMEHOW, this legendary author made me stomach it, and to some extent, like it too. I don't usually review fanfics, but I'm writing this for the sole purpose of appreciating the author and the masterpiece that he has cooked.

Story will diverge a lot from the original after the events regarding Shizue and the Ogres. We haven't even gone passed the events of Vol 1 from the novel yet.

Only the attire is the same. His looks are different. But if you think this attire is emo, then yes he is emo.

I can't completely ignore an integral plot point of the canon storyline no matter how much I dislike it.

So Team 7 will be Sasuke and the 2 sisters?

Amazing so far. The author has a talent for making OCs. The characters are well developed and don't feel like plain cardboard cutouts, instead actual people. Naruto's abilities are unique and the concepts are really cool.

Cool Old man

I think he should not be able to use the Kekkai Genkai that are of the body, like Kimimaro's bone bloodline, but he should be able to use the Kekkai Genkai based on the 'soul' ig? . Dunno, anyway, it's your story.

Hmmm. I was expecting some more fire and negative emotions in that letter, but ig this is realistic for a young boy.

I've got to say, you have a talent in making OCs. You, the sisters, Victor, all of them are well written.

The OC is cool so far. Naruto and Victor have the potential for an amazing dynamic. They kill someone together, Victor takes the body, Naruto takes the Soul.

Oh an OC! Hmmmm.... I dunno what to think about that. It's not a problem, but OCs are usually nuisances in a story if done poorly. Hope this develops well. I suggest properly defining the OC's personality, cuz often it fluctuates a lot, making them unrealistic and weird.

Good job actually developing the sisters' characters instead of 'Oh Naruto weak, he dumb, ooga booga'This is amazing so far.

I'm liking this Fic till now at least. The main thing is how you execute it from now. Best of Luck.

What can Veldora do? He's still in the prison.

Shouldn't it be Overclock?

Indian Festival

Not even similar, explained later on. And literally almost every skill has a magic version, so what's your point exactly?

""Apparently, with monsters, there were two different ways of creating offspring. The normal way, where you simply impregnated the female, and then the “let’s do it for real this time” way. With the former, the child would have some of the parents’ abilities, although it’d start out pretty weak. This method consumed very few magicules, so a male could have at it pretty much all he wanted, although the threat of bottoming out his magicule count still loomed with too much activity."" This is from Vol 3, reproduction doesn't always mean loss of power. I don't think the Village Leader would risk losing his power anyway, since he a duty to protect the village.

I messed up here lol. The Village Leader's eldest son, or Benimaru's brother isn't named yet, I accidentally put 'Hiiro'. He is from the Scarlet Bonds movie btw.