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Roopa_sree

Roopa_sree

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2021-06-04 JoinedGlobal
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    Posted

    The concept of your story is fresh as the world background is quite interesting with the different countries and creatures. The sentences can be shorter as writing long sentences make it confusing.The character background is quite good but I hope more information is given as the story progresses!Overall great story:)

    altalt
    The Dream Saga
    Fantasy · wookie0_
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    Commented

    The description is AWESOMEEE

    The sun shone with gentle radiance, melting the fog and casting a breath of vitality into the biodiversity. Dairy trucks drove on the vacant streets, delivering packets of milk to each household. A newspaper boy pedalled his bicycle, carrying a bundle of newspapers behind him.
    altalt
    Psychic Parasite
    Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    Posted

    I really liked the description of every action and how you got into the details but not too much of it.I was able to visualise the actions of the characters.The story has an unique concept!

    altalt
    Psychic Parasite
    Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    Posted

    It is a unique idea to start of with and the plot is really interesting.Quick to read and the language is quite good.Great Job! Maybe longer chapters?

    altalt
    Evolution to GOD
    Urban · REaper
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    Replied to DaoistrATrSU

    Aww thanksss!!

    altalt
    18 & still clueless
    Teen · Roopa_sree
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    Replied to Manish_Gupta_7212

    Thanks for the feedback!

    altalt
    18 & still clueless
    Teen · Roopa_sree
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