I hate you! This ************ just casually stealing a brilliant work then claiming to be in coma since he doesn't have any more chapters to steal. This dude surely pays does who says good reviews on this stolen work. How shameless of you to even delete our reviews. Sure enough. Maybe your twisted ways of becoming popular is working with how much hate your getting. You cant delete this now could you? Because it'll be ruining your coma b*llsh*t! All those who have read the original one. Let's take advantage of this opportunity to create more one star reviews to guide other readers!

I really liked this! However the ending really soiled my mood. Although im grateful for translating this. The ending is literally summarized into 10 or more sentences.

Ah. I did something wrong at the start. I wish edit buttons exist! _(┐「ε:)_

I cannot really indulge myself in this story. So many grammatical errors makes me wanna look at the author's brain. I wish i had the will to continue but the mc's character is very generic and quite annoying. Im just saying this alright. Pls don't feel offended.

Actually, i didn't notice this at the beginning. I was just feeling that its very familiar as if i have read it before. Everything is ok but this is just basically plagiarism. Im looking for stories similar to the author's pov. Im not reading anymore as i already knew what would happen. Please don't get offended author.

This kinda made it boring... Tho I'll still read jt.

The boy mentioned near the end was the one who took his eyes right?

That's probably just a typo

I love revered insanity! Too bad it got axed because of stupid reasons like: It can influence people, or Too brutal and bloody. I literally cried when that happened!

I really enjoyed reading this fanfic. It's not like those stupid cliche plots, infact, it mature and stable. I love the MC's obsession on researching and how this story is not focused on romance. Honestly, if there were any serious romance here then I won't really finish it. I love the plot, characters and everything here really... But the ending seemed a bit rushed? It's still enjoyable but kinda plain. But I understand your conditions author. I also did multiple fanfics in another app and I can't really continue some of them due to laziness and lack of ideas. Good luck and stay safe author-san! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

If they want to act deaf? Then make them deaf!

... I suddenly lost a bit of motivation to continue to read...

Im just writing about my opinion here okay? No need to hate. Okay so the reason why I rated low on this is because of the MC's personality. He's too much of a fanboy! I get it that he's an otaku and a huge fan of one piece because I'm one as well. He lacks ambition! The thing needed to go further the path of being a true pirate! He casually tells he's from another world to the straw hats even though he don't know them too well yet. He thinks like he's a spectator and treats everything like a fiction but it was his true reality! I endured his personality and read to see if he wakes up from his very wrong thinking. But I have up when he became cupid and tries to matchmake some characters.... He still haven't woken up from his fantasies... That power he has is useless as he always don't train to use his powers to survive... In one piece, it's a world for the strong and weak people won't survive or live nicely. I know this is a fanfic so this is all I'm gonna say. By the way... can someone notify me if the mc matures? Maybe I'll try to read again...

I'm new. Will he have a party system here?

I'm glad you understand ( ╹▽╹ )

Ehem! It's something called a review? If you don't know what a review is then here: A review is a note that you'll write to express your opinions about it. It means you can write what you feel about the story without anyone telling you to buzz off. It can only be called offensive if you write some cussing words , etc. Please don't hate this comment as I'm just stating facts and logic.

I like this a lot! The plot is very interesting and blood-boiling! It makes me so excited to read what's next. However, the fact that he just tells his secrets left and right makes me dissatisfied and made a bit of my interest vanish. But I refused to give up such a good potential story! So I endured and it makes me happy that I did that. The plot is okay and it's a good time easter for someone like me who has nothing to do with life. However I do wished that you did not just let him tell/show his secret just because of meeting someone familiar or because of anger since it really kills the curiosity one would have by reading. That's all.