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I know well that I am reviewing my own book, yet hear me out. I have a habit of never finishing the stories I begin, though my vision of the world is always broad and far-reaching. I am but a novice, yet I have long dreamed of bringing my own adventures to life. Take a look, I pray you, and grant me your honest review of how it fares. I am fond of swift and lively tales, yet my mind is ever overflowing with thoughts and ideas clamouring to be added. Read it in love or in disdain—whichever you please. I seek only to be nourished by your feedback. The blue owl slipped into the night with silent wings, hungry for thy reviews.
the honesty is brutal 😅. if you have time, can you rate mine, I wish to know my errors too. G.O.D Complex// Earth Prime
you can look into mine, G.o.d complex// prime earth... there's not really space traveling, however, it's a world were there's a blackout and after a long period of time humanity wakes up in an alien space ship who helps them survive former earth who has evolved.
Glad you like the 13 chapters prelude... I am thinking of making it a fantasy, but not sure, However, I have checked out the means to reach you, but it's not shown, neither on telegram or discord.
yeah, thanks for looking into it
☠️ Deadman, is he the main character or not 😂
The vivid description is great; feels like I am reading a real contracted novel. Character is well-built, and this is only the beginning. The last passage, describing the character in the car, was the peak; I literally found myself seated near him watching the action. Your book gives the feeling of being present in the story and watching it occur; the focus on the details of the environment was peak# describing the insect trapped in the spider next was so well written. I would keep reading. I don't know how to write well, but I do know how to pick interesting novels, and this one is already getting my attention.
The intro is enough to pick my curiosity, his first mission looks to be tough. Your book looks better than mine, I hope you keep writing chapters. By the way, my book is called The Wrath of the Re-climber.