mefait

... I hear frustration in those question marks. I'm sorry, I tend to overthink the drafts I've written and end up rewriting a lot which ends up taking longer than needed.

Same…

Yeah I get where you're coming from. ur right yeah orion is basically in most family matter one of those with formal authority. in publc and by tradition yeah men do hold more overt power especially in pureblood patriarchs. but I guess what i wanted to show was that private power isnt always the same as socail power. that walburga has no qualms about bending rules or crossing lines ans she's willing to use methods orion wouldnt anticipate or counter in that moment. the point of the scene isnt to suggest that she could overthrow him politically, but rather to show how personal violations can happen even when someone "in charge" on paper. orions lack of immediate retalitation isnt all about pride and being abset but its about the way he's been conditioned to endure, compartmentalise and keep the whole black fade intact. standing up to her in publicwould mean cracking that image, and he's a man who learned that appearances matters more than personal justice. So no i wouldnt say ur waffling, ur opinion is defintely valid. I liked the idea of this scene meant to make you uncomfortable and to complicate the idea that power in a relationship is always one directional especially in a family such as the blacks who are built on control and manipulations from both sides.

Thanks for first review!

Thanks, did u read the old version? I hated it which was why I stopped. It was literally leading to no where.

Yeah, I try not to go over 10k when I can but I didn’t know want to put anything in the next chapter or remove anything

I mean… he hasn’t even turned fourteen yet, who really knows what they actually want in life at the age of thirteen. Yeah, I don’t mind your opinion, really don’t. I only write when I get bored, you know? Not really trying to be a writer tbh. Though wouldn’t mine u being more specific that helps, I find it more fun to go over things and fix them. Oooh and the people being older and younger than cannon? Um can you expand on that cause that has me confused… the only person that isn’t cannon age is Amelia, perhaps I made a mistake somewhere? Cause I really can’t think of any of the cannon characters not being their cannon age. The plot holessss, please tell me more. It would be easier to fix things with more specifics- I mean I take loooonnggg breaks sometimes that I forget what I was planning to do cause I don’t really write things down at times. And yeah the fanfic is probably a mess tbh and a bore… but then again I write it when I’m actually not busy and want busy myself. Thankkk you very much really appreciate your honesty

They’r in their third now but just sayin since their second year

no, perhaps I made a mistake in a sentence somewhere

Sorry about that. I mostly started this for fun and to do when I’m and might have time. Though seeing how people actually like it I try update as often as I can but right now I’ more focused on studying since I have an exam I need to sit Thank you for the review!