Lost_Soul_Palace

Honestly don't see my rating that is just there to help the translator My actual ranking is 1/5 star because the fanfic has Chinese life mixed in the middle of the story which drag this story to shit and becoming the bottom of the barrel of shit. Anyway i got to say i again the Chinese life in this story is shit. If the translator at least just skip the Chinese life and focus on the cyberpunk it could be a decent 3.5/5, it could be higher if the author also doesn't poke fun of david from time to time. Also did you know anything that adds Chinese nationalism is known garbage and should be deleted. Well let see if this review will stay up.

Yo bro this fanfic is so good, you need to continue it, i thought when it was a week without update that it was a dropped novel. TFTC

Hey author, i remember this novel is incomplete so are you planning to continue the novel after reaching the end?

Im just amazed that the entity is willing to create 13.7 billion years of history, must have been his passion project lol But goddamn this is peak and good thing he isn't breaking down too much when his reality was shattered but carries himself forward and not have 100+ Chapter of drama filled bs

*Warning Spoiler* Well i read the MTL and it's a decent read but the ending is rushed. So it has good development for romance which i like and his power is really decently used The world building is fine, it's not so fucked up like most other fanfic. The progression is good but he defeats all for one very quickly and the plot stops after he defeats OFA, i wished they just moved forward but have a different villain it literally has a good development and good romance which is hard to find so i was when they rushed the ending

How is he a vice admiral with that abysmal power, isn't the vice admiral rank at least need haki for you to be qualified. Also why was he chosen, literally akainu and kuzan fought for the position so it literally is a matter of strength to hold the position not just intelligence Anyway for you who like it, don't take my rant to heart, it's just annoying where they start as a weak character just for a system to show up and change it God i will never state how much i hate system as a power system, it can go die in the deepest part of hell and torture for eternity, system is a shit power system for world building

*Slight Spoiler Warning* Have read the ongoing MTL. This fanfic is so good as a story and also the world building is top notch, you don't feel like the author undermining a certain character or just deny them their character. So in term of the world building this is very good for a fanfic. Now the romance is a single female lead which is definitely a plus for me and their interaction is just so fun, you will know who she is once you read it but i won't spoil too much. The character progression is also worth it, you can feel as the MC is integrating to the world and not just feels like an observer. Honestly the system was kinda a mute point for me but it gets pushed aside and not becoming important in the latter part of the story. Overall a very decent read and i highly highly recommend for those looking for a good fanfic. 9/10

Bro is just mimicking the average iq of the webnovel reviewers, so no worries about it

Bro don't bother, this guy and the other guy who said naruto is sexist is definitely the same person, also they definitely uses bot liking because who is dumb enough to like that dumbass review 12 times All I'm saying is the guy is a waste of air to talk too

Absolutely beautiful story, man I can't wait for the next chapter