Thanks for the chapter author, And keep up the good work, I can see you improving every chapter, From the first trash chapter, To more readable chapters, There are still flaws but, We can't really expect a perfect chapter at the get go, So just keep on improving

Continue to read the fic, We see the author is getting better at writing, It was mentioned that this is his first fic after all, It's understandable to have a bad 1st chapter, As we can see the author is still a newbie and not copying someone's work

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