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WarSon1yrReplied to leowoodCh 1 Chapter 1 - Nightmarefest, Part 1- WarSon1yrReplied to Waluigi_1
thank you, I really appreciate it
"I am a Witch" he replied - WarSon1yrReplied to Nero_K_Cagliostro
Yes, I know; the beginning of the story was extremely improvised, it was from the chapter entitled 'Viktor Drichey' that I began to take this about being a writer more seriously
"I am a Witch" he replied - WarSon1yrReplied to Nero_K_Cagliostro
Currently I can no longer modify the story, as it has already been marked as finished. At the moment I am working on a rework of the base of the story. the changes will be added as special chapters in the new story that I will publish soon
She closed her eyes and tried to remember how to do what had given her his title. - WarSon2yrReplied to AshburnDz
most of it is explanation about mechanics, and character introduction; in deep fog you will see that the information will drop suddenly. The explanations are mainly detailed because I seek to capture a balanced and well-implemented system. Overlord was heavily inspired by D&D, but it's an unbalanced world (like many Isekai) where it's impossible to feel that the main characters are in danger. for my part I was inspired by pathfinder, literally each of the characters that are in my story are 100% playable in pathfinder, everything that I show in the story is part of the pathfinder game system; the only thing I had to change was the magic system, because for the novel I had to give a more abstract explanation
The latter was a complicated figure to describe, although he was dressed in a maid uniform, his short stature and androgynous features made it difficult to identify his gender, at first glance he could be seen as an adorable child with clothes of the opposite sex, but if he was carefully examined and Due to her apparent age, it was difficult to identify her real gender, but if the above were not enough, on her head and slightly hidden by her maid hat, were a cute cat ears. - WarSon2yrReplied to AshburnDz
if you already have experience in RPGs, you can skip the chapters until you reach Deep Fog. although you may miss the introduction of some characters
The latter was a complicated figure to describe, although he was dressed in a maid uniform, his short stature and androgynous features made it difficult to identify his gender, at first glance he could be seen as an adorable child with clothes of the opposite sex, but if he was carefully examined and Due to her apparent age, it was difficult to identify her real gender, but if the above were not enough, on her head and slightly hidden by her maid hat, were a cute cat ears. - WarSon2yrReplied to
really with the restructuring of the first chapters (approximately half of the first story arc) the errors that I have noticed and the errors that you (the readers) have pointed out to me, I have corrected them, I make sure to move the beginning as far as possible from overlord, but I had a problem, Webnovel only allows to make small changes in an already published chapter, so I decided to finish this story, finish some writing courses that I'm doing and then do the continuation of this story, where I will publish special chapters that will replace chapters of this story.
The latter was a complicated figure to describe, although he was dressed in a maid uniform, his short stature and androgynous features made it difficult to identify his gender, at first glance he could be seen as an adorable child with clothes of the opposite sex, but if he was carefully examined and Due to her apparent age, it was difficult to identify her real gender, but if the above were not enough, on her head and slightly hidden by her maid hat, were a cute cat ears. - WarSon2yrReplied to AshburnDz
I would really like to show the changes, because I literally rewrote all the first chapters from 0, but I had a problem, Webnovel only allows small changes from a chapter that was already published; for that reason I finished this story, in the future I plan to publish the continuation, in said continuation I will publish special chapters that replace chapters of my first story
"Now ... Now is not the time for that kind of thing." - WarSon2yrReplied to JoaKko_2609
I apologize for the errors, English is not my native language, as the chapters progress the errors disappear. I am currently working on a complete restructuring of the first chapters where I will change how the story starts and make sure there are no mistakes
In an attempt to avert her gaze from him, she lowered his eyes but found Keil's breasts, the shapely and balanced twin peaks of his. He was in direct contact with his body. - WarSon2yrReplied to Ghost_Playing
Sorry for the errors, the english is not my mother tongue, I am currently working on a reissue of the first few chapters where I will implement major changes to the structure of the beginning of the novel, correcting all the errors in the process
His shoulders began to shake and then her true feelings that he had held back for a long time exploded. - WarSon2yrReplied to K_Log
I am currently working on a reissue of the first chapters where I will implement big changes to the structure of the beginning of the novel, correcting all the errors in the process.
Releasing her, he looked down at her own hand and saw her pale skin. Without losing hope, he searched for her pulse, obviously there was no heartbeat. - WarSon2yrReplied to Andreas_Vranjes
I am, but continue reading and you will see the differences that my story has with overlord
"Yes my Lord, play whatever you want and where you want." - WarSon2yrReplied to Bazka
I know what you mean; the base is overlord, I can't deny it, but as you progress in the story you will be able to notice the difference, approximately apart from chapter 20 it was that I started taking writing classes
"SHIT, FUCK, THEY ARE TRAITORS, WHY? WHY? WHY?!! What did I do wrong? What was my mistake? I-I-I… .. AARR! " - WarSon2yrReplied to streek135
error during the writing, I really sorry. the correction was made
This paragraph has been deleted. - WarSon2yrReplied to MagnusBane
you win, i will make the change
"A powerful Arch Witch with the appearance of a High Elf who is actually an undead Fairy, his powers and abilities were so high that he could statistically be compared to a god. What was he thinking of making him so strong?" after meditating for a few moments he remembered "For more pleasure of course." - WarSon2yrReplied to MagnusBane
sorry for the mistake, I have already corrected it. english is not my main language
he she was losing the sensitivity in her whole body... - WarSon2yrReplied to MagnusBane
yes, a male fairy witch. your eyes do not deceive you
"A powerful Arch Witch with the appearance of a High Elf who is actually an undead Fairy, his powers and abilities were so high that he could statistically be compared to a god. What was he thinking of making him so strong?" after meditating for a few moments he remembered "For more pleasure of course."