WarSon

Greetings, I am interested in your offer, a week ago I sent you an email

I really appreciate your words of support and motivation; although english is not my native language, i try my best to improve in my writing.

thank you, I really appreciate it

Yes, I know; the beginning of the story was extremely improvised, it was from the chapter entitled 'Viktor Drichey' that I began to take this about being a writer more seriously

Currently I can no longer modify the story, as it has already been marked as finished. At the moment I am working on a rework of the base of the story. the changes will be added as special chapters in the new story that I will publish soon

most of it is explanation about mechanics, and character introduction; in deep fog you will see that the information will drop suddenly. The explanations are mainly detailed because I seek to capture a balanced and well-implemented system. Overlord was heavily inspired by D&D, but it's an unbalanced world (like many Isekai) where it's impossible to feel that the main characters are in danger. for my part I was inspired by pathfinder, literally each of the characters that are in my story are 100% playable in pathfinder, everything that I show in the story is part of the pathfinder game system; the only thing I had to change was the magic system, because for the novel I had to give a more abstract explanation

if you already have experience in RPGs, you can skip the chapters until you reach Deep Fog. although you may miss the introduction of some characters

really with the restructuring of the first chapters (approximately half of the first story arc) the errors that I have noticed and the errors that you (the readers) have pointed out to me, I have corrected them, I make sure to move the beginning as far as possible from overlord, but I had a problem, Webnovel only allows to make small changes in an already published chapter, so I decided to finish this story, finish some writing courses that I'm doing and then do the continuation of this story, where I will publish special chapters that will replace chapters of this story.

I would really like to show the changes, because I literally rewrote all the first chapters from 0, but I had a problem, Webnovel only allows small changes from a chapter that was already published; for that reason I finished this story, in the future I plan to publish the continuation, in said continuation I will publish special chapters that replace chapters of my first story

I apologize for the errors, English is not my native language, as the chapters progress the errors disappear. I am currently working on a complete restructuring of the first chapters where I will change how the story starts and make sure there are no mistakes