Don't worry. I don't know anything about the dynasty either 🤣

"Even though she had no internal force". Otherwise it makes no sense. And as told already, take away the "but".

I had expectations about this story because I saw it everywhere, but I wouldn't have guessed it was this good. The tension is real. The action is so cinematic. And the characters and drama? You connect with it since the very beginning. Totally recommended!

The story seems intriguing enough to keep going. The flashforward in the beginning sets up an interesting plot to stay interested. Good work! Keep on going!

I think it sets up the setting and plot very nicely!