JairoSTorres
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JairoSTorres3 years agoCommented- JairoSTorres3 years agoCommented
Don't worry. I don't know anything about the dynasty either 🤣
- JairoSTorres3 years agoCommented
"Even though she had no internal force". Otherwise it makes no sense. And as told already, take away the "but".
- JairoSTorres3 years agoPosted
I had expectations about this story because I saw it everywhere, but I wouldn't have guessed it was this good. The tension is real. The action is so cinematic. And the characters and drama? You connect with it since the very beginning. Totally recommended!
- JairoSTorres3 years agoPosted
The story seems intriguing enough to keep going. The flashforward in the beginning sets up an interesting plot to stay interested. Good work! Keep on going!
- JairoSTorres3 years agoCommented
I think it sets up the setting and plot very nicely!
