SeanBrikey

2 months later... I am sad there no update :(

Ye what I meant it updates on the same day each week on Sunday lol

Btw the reason the MC reminds me of Johnny is because Johnny was rude and mean yet kinda smart but can be dumb. MC is straight forward to be rude, is pretty smart and can be dumb. Both have disability in the leg to which they had to use a wheelchair and both had something/somebody to help with the injury they had. The only difference was Johnny was shot in somewhere that wasn't in the leg but stopped it from really doing anything while the MC had a tree fallen on him crushing his leg bones or something like that. I really kinda want to know if Johnny and MC were suppose to be alike or at least if you know Johnny.

Writing Quality: 5: The quality is good and I don't remember any bad grammer, or wrong spelling. Updating Stability: 5: The Stability of updating is good as it update at the same day each day from the chapters I seen so far. Story Development: 5: The development is not super quick nor super slow. Very nice and chill Character Design: 5: Victor who is the mc and like the only oc is designed kinda good. I just don't know if he is dumb or smart and makes me feel very weird but thats just my opinion. However the idea of the system made it 5. Idk if I count the system but whatever. World Background: 4: I would make this 4.5 but Idk how. It teaches you some stuff inside the world but generally you need to know what the world is to make everything make sense. Overall rating is 4.8(4.9if I could make the backround 4.5) I like this very much. All I have to say is...Stay Chill Author, Stay Sane. Also for some reason the MC kinda reminds me on Johnny Joestar from Jojo part 7. Main Character Insults to Luka be like

Yay a chapter

Please update this :(

While I was reading this the light reminded me of a Dragon Ball from Dragon Ball Z. Since while reading I thought of Goku holding the camera instead of a Dragon Ball. Lol just something I thought.

Ples ples update every day lol. Me like story. Please update this or me sad :(. Lol if you can please update when you can since me like this.

But then there is the problem of how it will happen. Since the gods have a problem with time travel and in order for each timeline of Dragon Ball to get together then they would have to go through alternative time that most likely will include the future in which they would have to time travel.

Eyyy that's pretty good. I like this a lot as the concept is something I haven't seen yet.