factory inc ?

Love everything about the book , But the main problem falls to the stability of the chapter updates. It is just too slow and non consistent. Another thing that I hope to happen soon is that I want the M.C to come back his home univers it's not a bad thing that I am docking off points for it is just something that I hope to happen sooner rather than later. love the book tho Sorry if the review is bad its my first one.