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steal an ak 47 and use telekinesis to enhance the bullets also guns are cool
it's cool man take some time to relax and feel better
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the whole beginning of the story sets up the main character as an apathetic person due to his experiences. yet the moment he's showed even the faintest bit of affection he melts which is stupid because he had over 15 years of neglect and is apathetic. It makes no God damn sense to me
wow rude
ass writing, forced plot development,needless ROB intervention to keep things cannon, mc is constantly being walked all over. overall ass 100 fanfic if you can even call it that