*embarrassed reply* I'm a bit busy with my studies in this period... I have 2 exams within the next few months and the stress generated by them is not small... sorry

yep

A coincidence

Yes, I took the idea from that novel...

oh, I got it... You're indeed right... it may not make sense to use precise units in descriptions... After all, it's impossible to let the readers visualize what I'm imagining... It's better to let their imagination fill the gaps As for the problems with the cave arcs, I've indeed felt like there is something wrong... Maybe because there isn't any real character? The conversations with the AI were as simple as I could make them and to be honest they make perfect sense to me but it may actually be like this because, after all, I'm the all-mighty and omniscient author... I will need to gather more feedbacks to pinpoint the problems and fix them... Anyway, thanks for the clarification, I think we can agree there is nothing better than understanding how to improve when writing a story

Thanks for your honest opinion, I definitely appreciate it but more importantly I'm curious about the constructive critiques. First, the measurement units, can you please elaborate on it? I'm not sure where is the problem or how to fix it... Same for the feeling of a big dragging (This time I have no idea of that sentence's meaning) Can you elaborate a little so that I can understand how to improve? thanks

...between the chapters so that does not interested can... -->...between the chapters so that those not interested can...

Hm... Tbh, I was a bit perplexed about how to give him more screen time... After all, he is an important character for both the story development of this novel and another novel of mine that I've just started creating... The only problem is how to do so. At first, I thought that giving him a bit of space within a chapter when he met a major plot twist was enough… but doing so doesn't allow the readers to empathise much with him nor does it let the readers discover his background story…. So, I recently came to a possible solution. Maybe I can dedicate a whole chapter to him sometimes… Something like the short story in the auxiliary chapters that I've published 2 days ago… With the only difference being that rather than a short story I can make it a parallel story hidden between the chapters so that does not interested can directly skip it… Maybe I should also keep an auxiliary chapter as an index to let readers who skipped side stories find them easily

He isn't tired of living...

Hehehe, glad you got confused. When a character says or thinks something, doubt should fill the reader's mind as questions like "Is this information true?" or "Is he saying what he/she truly thinks, or is he/she wearing a mask?"

Yep! This isn't the typical novel where the MC rises from nothing... It's more of a journey where we accompany the MC in his evolution while sightseeing the universe around him

Thanks for the feedback and don't worry, there is no harem in this novel (for the MC)... Also, this short story is indeed set during the breaking of the seal, and also on another continent...

3291 words… Basically, more than 2 chapters combined. I hope you enjoyed it. Anyway, what do you think about this side story? I thought it would have been an interesting idea to write something like this… after all, this world is way too huge to be described with the main chapters alone. This one was more of an experiment than anything else, I wanted to see if you enjoy side content as much as I do… Besides, would it have been better to split this "short" story into 2 chapters? Tell me freely anything passing through your mind so that I will improve in the future (Also, don't forget to drop a few power stones or share this awesome novel with your friends, I definitely appreciate both of those actions)

Well... wait to read humans' history on this planet, I won't say anything else or it would be considered as a spoiler...

Ehm, you got it wrong, the NIB is something like an identity card, in this case, the owner is Cyril...

Glad you liked it, I hope to keep updating it, the world-building that I've already prepared is truly massive and I'm just as excited as you to share it... (Next chapter is almost completed, I will publish it tomorrow)

exactly, it's not easy to become a dragon... In this universe, dragons are one of the most powerful races... Even those carrying a small trace of their bloodline aren't ordinary beings.

I like guesses like this one, and I won't confirm nor reject them, I hope other readers will share their opinion on the topic... It would be unfair on my part to ruin the fun of reading web novels🙃

Personally, I absolutely agree. Most of the time it's the journey that decides whether reaching your goal turns out to be a success or a failure

I'm glad you're curious... That is exactly why I won't explicitly reveal the reason for the MC's reaction. If you want to discover the reason, you will have to read between the lines of the future chapters, I hope you will enjoy it. (To be honest, it's not complicated, however, it's necessary to develop a basic understanding of the world-building)