If you havent updated the book, When “Raheem” is mentioned it is actually referring to “Sori”. corrections haS been made

IDk y im feeling like the Ancient one is gonna be an issue in later chapters

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Ive read 6 chp so far, Ive made more grammatical errors than you in my Novel, and English is my mother Language. Youre a great author

Great story so far, quite Different and I always live the different takes people take when it comes to the seven deadly sins, Easily one of my favorite ToPics next to Norse mythology. This author’s writing skill gives me The feeling of someone who is actually quite experience. Everyone should give this book a read. Power stones too!

No explanation. just skipped forward to Volks approaching. It is implied that Acura tried to explain but no one believes him because of his history of bad behavior .

The fight between Acura and Sori Took Place outside. when VOlks shows up they are already inside and situation handled by Nadine. Thanks for the observations.

Good job, this is actually a great read! Glad i gave it a try.

Great Novel story so far, Author seems experienced by the way they tell the story

Genesiz literally curses for everything 😂 u gotta love it.

I love this!

You have great writing skills, using active words and a nice flow that kept me reading. a little short for the first chp though. I also have a story about Mercs, called “Merc$”. hope to see more from you.

You have great writing skills, using active words and a nice flow that kept me reading. a little short for the first chp though. I also have a story about Mercs, called “Merc$”. hope to see more from you.

You have great writing skills, using active words and a nice flow that kept me reading. Mark looks like he’s gonna be my favorite . I also have a story about Mercs, called “Merc$”. hope to see more from you.

You have great writing skills, using active words and a nice flow that kept me reading. a little short for the first chp though. I also have a story about Mercs, called “Merc$”. hope to see more from you.

First thing first...that aint my kid! 😂