Diamrem

I love the story! The world building is pretty smooth, introducing all the important topics in the first few chapters, and I enjoy the characters' interactions with each other. The writing style is good and the dialogue is well written, everything is pushing the story forward. I can't wait for the rest of the chapters!

The dialogue is a little tedious and doesn't really move the story forward at places but I do love the dynamic between the characters! It's very engaging and I can't wait to see how the story pans out.

I love the multiple POV's! Your writing style is very captivating, using a wide range of colorful vocabulary and pretty good grammar. I like the dynamic between the characters that have been introduced so far and I can't wait to see how the story comes together. The world building so far is pretty neat and I do like the way you write your dialogue, it's easy to read and understand.