This one was strange.

Yeah please do a take over as axel seems enclave material I've been playing too many games with enclave mods and kinda want to see an enclave like UNCS now XD

Love the FMA stuff and yeah that PS from fma was basically pure soul energy so if anything given that those spiders where magical i would bet they would substitute a whole kingdom nicely.

Pretty sure the ice release was due to the rennigan so no dont give hime ice release

Nice chapter and so far you've done great but just don't put to much plot in to soon as you want to save some for later.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Well when even akanu is not to sure it really puts in perspective how tough Kaido really is XD.

This chapter was sudden and ruined any momentum for the plot you had and I'm expecting you to drop in to 20 ish chapters now but if im wrong ill be back but i have just seen this to much and will not invest into a book that will most likely not be finished.

Dude needs to work on his plot writing but other than that is great[img=exp][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=update]

It's good but for me it just feels like its missing something.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Yo its good to have you back man webnovel has been a little stale lately XD

Just to much filler to have any good storyline.[img=faceslap] [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

What an ending you always do that corn, ill be reminiscing this book for a week XD good way to tell a book is great!

THANKS!!! Looking forward to starwars too!!!!

Dont give up!!! Some times good fics need time but this is great!!!

Seems like you need a hiatus for some fresh ideas man as this is becoming cliché

Yeah but your doing great

For me this is more of a fantasy than a story so its just not my thing but grammer is kinda ok so its readable at least[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

And place higher in the updated section.

Webnovel sucks in advertising good fanfics with the list sometimes rarely even updating for ratings just post an auxiliary chapter and update it every now and again as if it still works that way will count as a new chapter ever update.

After i read the start i just popped a blunt and skimmed it and it was ok XD.