Dervi

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Great story. Writing quality is good, although i usualy don't like first person view 'I' writing, I have to say that it reads good in the story, and there arent any serious grammatical mistakes. As for wold background and charcter design, i think they are the best part of the story. especially the world background, whether its the decribed world map, political situation (though they feel a bit simplified) and magic and power foundations of the world.

Great novel! I love the charcters development, especially Terek, and the world background and power system is fantastic also. though I still dont fully understand how spirits work I like the concept a lot. the only downside is that from time to time grammer and writing is a bit confusing, but its only occasionally, so its not a big deal.

Great novel. I have read untill the start of the second volume and till now the story was amazing. although i think that the detailed description every side charcter gets is a bit over the top, its amazing how much the author put in to the story charcter's and world background.