hmmm... If I said now, they will be spoilers. But this story is like you play most of the games. There are protagonists, antagonists, supporters, and... =^o^=

Oh my... You were right! Sorry for my negligence. I'll try to fix it soon.

The story is good and interesting. Keep it up, man. I'm waiting for the next updates. =(^o^)= ..............................................

Thank you for your support.

haha

Thank you for your support.

Thank you for your advice. I will try my best to fix my grammar and writing.

The story is good and had great potential. But the introduction was still lacking for me, maybe because this was isekai. Hope in the later chapter, you can give more hints about this female lead before going to isekai. I already put it in the library and still keep reading.

What a beautiful story... Hmm... actually I'm not keen on BL, but the story plots are interesting from the start. If only I didn't saw the title at the beginning, maybe I thought this was a normal couple. Hehe...

Nice cover. From the cover, I already know what the story will be. I already read a few chapters. This story had great prospects, just keep up the good works author.

I can't say much, because I only read a few chapters. But this story is good, has good potential. Just need to polish a little bit, in here and there, then it will be perfect.

My oh my... impatient father. Hehe

The story was good, It's getting better and better in each chapter. About the grammar, I can't talk much. Because my grammar not good also. Just don't give up on your writing. Grammar isn't the main problem, if your story is good then people will support you.

Haha... you will see in halfway story [img=recommend]

Maybe... Hehehe... Thank you for your support. Keep reading, the story will update every day.

Dangerous will never end...

"Your wish is my comment..."

yup...

If already addicted, then they surely are.

Thank you for your advice. The story will be updated every day.