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As of now I see that the writing quality seems to be low. It seems like the author doesn’t have pacing down. It reads with some tinges of opinion piece with the opening about modernity. However, the story is slow to start and the chapter ends with the main character having one action for the progression of the story, that is falling through a hole or something of that nature to get isekai’d. We don’t know much about he character except that he is just one of us, someone who is going through modern reality but that doesn’t tell us much and isn’t interesting at all. The way the story builds up the introduction is less than satisfactory. Please tell me if this gets better but as of right now I see this being a huge issue. It is a huge issue even if it gets better though so I hope revisions on the opening can be done at least. If the problem persists further than the opening then I don’t think this will be a story worth reading. Overall though thank you to the author for writing and hopefully I can come back feeling differently about further stories as things get better.

I just want to see some valid criticisms not that the story is a harem. Seeing a story be praised more than criticized while those criticisms are valid makes me want to read it. As of right now I would like more clear information.

How often does the story update?

Best girl lol