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DaoistAmJoe2yrCommentedmaybe it's changed later but better not call mc Iz in 3rd person. already super cringe reading shuri call him that
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the author has definitely never seen a newborn before.
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ew. that just kinda ruined the whole novel for me. and didn't he have a simple bet with ROB, or is he going to pull the whole "I never intended on keeping my promise" bit.
Of course, I didn't mind it much. Himiko was just another pawn in my grand game against the ROB. - DaoistAmJoe2yrCommented
itachi, is that you??
"Alright scardy cats, listen up! That attack of mine was only an illusion. You all fell into my illusion when you stared into my eyes. The moment you all stared into my eyes, was the moment the illusion started." The instructor explained. - DaoistAmJoe2yrCommented
unnecessary. overkill.
"Tsukuyomi!" - DaoistAmJoe2yrCommented
the envy was maybe beating like a heart in his eyes
Listening to the discussions around him and looking at the beautiful figure on the platform, Su Yi could not help but feel a hint of envy in his eyes. - DaoistAmJoe2yrCommented
gosh this is so boring. after the whole parents thing I don't think I've been able to properly complete a whole chapter. I wish you luck on your novel.
"Never, you will be my first and the queen". Alex quickly hugged her back tightly as he patted her back to soothe her mood. - DaoistAmJoe2yrCommented
what about Olaf? or his is just unstoppable?
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I swear so true
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is it just me or is the English getting more and more terrible as the story progress
"O you gained the power of volibearing from that game called league of legends, hmm but I think it will be difficult for you to survive in this universe with only his power so I will give you a Buff!" Wilson was sad to have to pass his His next lifetime of hiding lit up when he received the news that he would receive a Buff. - DaoistAmJoe2yrCommented
I know it is probably for the story to reveal something like that. but it is just not practical in the least. not to mention extremely dumb. no one in their right mind. especially one from earth who knows the behavior of the Naruto world would reveal something like that
As expected, people started to treat me differently as the news of my power spread, I couldn't blame them though, I did what by all means should be impossible, I violated the laws of nature without breaking a sweat, and now I was seen as some kind of saviour, or demon, depending on the perspective of the beholder. - DaoistAmJoe2yrCommented
is it just me or is the whole 'you are lying thing kinda annoying
Vincent cocked his eyebrows. Under Watson's nervous gaze, the young man said, "Aside from just leaving behind four Pentacolor Fragrant Chickens, your master took away thousands of hens too, didn't he? Does your master like to eat chicken. He also took away one thousand of our hens the first time, right? If he ate them all in a few days, does it mean that he has a big appetite?" - DaoistAmJoe2yrReplied to Rimurum
thats right. fringe. I've been trying to remember the episode but I'm coming blank. too lazy to search
Behind him, the young man on the motorcycle hurriedly dodged and fell into a fruit stall by the side of the road. A huge pile of fruit fell to the ground… - DaoistAmJoe2yrCommented
one day me too I'll reach 4 pushups
I'm lying on the ground completely soaked in sweat. Four pushups, six situps, three squats, and five minutes of running. - DaoistAmJoe2yrCommentedCh 2 Glasses
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is he going to put pencils and gum in there
"I have a storage ring here that can hold 500 ml of water. Consider it as my entrance gift to you." - DaoistAmJoe2yrCommented
why did I laugh at this??
"Modey, F-Class superpower, support class, house cleaning."