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hhhh. the quality of the story been really going downhill. Why has the MC suddenly been so super nerfed? What is this Akali and Irelia super nerf combination?? It doesnt make sense at all. it really doesn't.
i am confused. so let me get this straight. after all his self contemplation and enlightenment, the answer he came up with was to still allow things to play out, not intervene and leave with them?? makes no sense
maybe it's changed later but better not call mc Iz in 3rd person. already super cringe reading shuri call him that
the author has definitely never seen a newborn before.
ew. that just kinda ruined the whole novel for me. and didn't he have a simple bet with ROB, or is he going to pull the whole "I never intended on keeping my promise" bit.
itachi, is that you??
unnecessary. overkill.
the envy was maybe beating like a heart in his eyes
either author deleted the real reviews or people shockingly find this interesting. after the whole parents thing the whole book went downhill. extremely boring.
gosh this is so boring. after the whole parents thing I don't think I've been able to properly complete a whole chapter. I wish you luck on your novel.