Amina_Balanya

Yes it's his turn to fall for her

Yeah I'm not sure about this guy

Yes he cares ,he really does care

Come on just when it was a little wholesome

Please misbehave

But it's kinda true with power you can literally do anything right. someone back me up here

Yes you have gone soft

Finally the man is acting like a human

I love how the author has used multiple povs and each pov is unique with different personalities, you can tell that it's difficult, well I know it's difficult for me.but there's some grammar mistakes here and there and the paragraphing can vary a bit but I can notice some gradual improvement as the story progresses but that's just my opinion.